evaluation

My analysis for my video The Package

by Fabian, Kurt, Bailey and Ren

In my video there are some great parts and some bad points to the video which I will comment on in the order that they appear in the video. Firstly, the good parts would be at the very start Ren slowly walks into the shot and walks over to the bench and sits down. This builds up a great tension because it is dramatic as the pace of Ren is quite slow. As so during the video no one looks at the camera which make the hole video look more realistic and make it’s as if there is no camera filming them and because of this it doesn’t look like it had been planned.

However, the are some very terrible parts which is in places in the video it jumps from scene to scene and due to this the video just doesn’t flow as nice as it should. But in some places in the video there is poor continuity because in one part Ren is facing one way then in the next part is facing the other way and has moved places a little bit.  Also when Ren is sitting on the bench in the video it zooms right in on her face which was to quick and far to close then a couple of seconds later it zooms out only half on the zoomed in.  This doesn’t look very good and make the video look funny. But also there is poor continuity because during the video the sun is in one place then in the next scene of the video it’s in a different place which can clearly be shown by the shadows. Also the props and actors had moved a bit so the video doesn’t flow like it was supposed to. And the camera moves angle quite often which means the video couldn’t flow very well.

 But there is also more good point about this video which are; camera chase Ren and Kurt are running through the woods and the camera man bailey runs through the woods with them this is great because it creates a sense of speed and movement which worked great. But during the video Ren is shot and ends up laying on the floor and for the rest of the video she doesn’t seem to have moved and remains in the same position on the ground but also how the scenes are shot you don’t get to see her breathing which makes it look like she was dead.